My name is hellen marquez, I `m student in the Bilingual Administrative Assistant Program at the Colombo. I live with my parents and my brothers in the luz neighbourhood. I have a handsome boyfriend, I don`t have a lot of friends,I`m a beautiful woman, I `m 18 years old, My favorite color is black, I love the fast food, I like fraggleggs, I often cook in the affternoon, I don`t
play basketball very well, I don`t go to the beach very often and I never listen to music in the mornings but I like.
Jairo is my father, He is a great mechanic, He is a good father and good husband too, H`s 39 year s old, He works in the Simon Bolivar neighbourhood, He doesn`t his job, H`s very strict and he is a busy man.
His favorite singer is Diomedes Diaz, his voice is amazing think my father, He doesn`t smoke, He usually goes to the church, He watches t.v in the evening and he likes football but, He doesn`t play very often.
Maria is my mother, She is a wonderfull woman and she is a excellent dress maker too. She`s my best friend, She doesn`t wash the clothes every day but she washes the clothes twice a week, She works every day in the mornings and sometimes all day, She doesn`t like classical music but, She likes salsa and vallenato, She`s 40 years old, She gets up at 5.00 `o clock am, and she is very very intelligen .
Juan Pacheco is my english teacher, He is very crazy and outgoing, He is very tall and fat, He `s 52 years old and he is married.
He teaches english very well, He works in the colombo, He is a great teacher and good man, He loves his jod, He doesn`t live in New York but,He speaks english very well. I love teacher.
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Dear Hellen:
ResponderEliminarThis is a very good post! Very informative and easy to understand. Next time, leave a space after you use a comma. Pay attention to the use of articles a / an, too. Great job!
Yes Hellen,
ResponderEliminarThis is very good work. Please review the punctuation, in special the third paragraph.
hellen your composition is very nice, and pretty
ResponderEliminarbaby "space after comma"
Hi
ResponderEliminaryour composition is very nice but check up the punctuation, leave space after comma and capital letter.
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